First mock-up for the crit

Crit feedback

I got a lot of critical advice that I need to look into.
Firstly was to either make my book 
a “how to”
or 
just a question book,
 most people swayed with a question book. They said it can downsize my audience range, which I never thought of. 
Rethink audience.
Secondly- the polaroids are too week

Thirdly- Too much white space in a children’s book, more colour.

THINK OUTSIDE THE BOX

The big font is work, simplify text and space the font a bit more-clearer to read.